khaYal jO hai ki...dil dhak se raH gaya tha>>>....aacha haI aur aaPne ek naYa sa khayaL diya hai...per baKI kavitaye saB wahi bateN kaH rahe hai jO aaJ taK kahi gaye hai.... marI bate bure lage saYaD per maIn saYad aapKa aacha dOst Hu ...sayAd abhUt aacha !!!!
kucH naYa khaYal likhe kOI naYe ibarat baNe....kOi naYa tazurMa... kOi naYa maNzerNama .....jO aaPka hO sIrf aaPka!!jO kisi ne na kaHa hO.......aapNi aanKho se dekHiye JahaN KO ...........jaha ki aaanKHo se aaPne aapKo naHI.......
jate jate.....
riste darkhto ke jard patte hai, tutte hai to taklif hoti hai.....
Ritu here m agree wid vimal jee.... Maine ye nazm ya ghazal jo bi hai padhi to nahee....ya kah lo padh nahee paya.. But u have talent n some time u fail to decifer it.....
In nut shell.....u r good driver bt some time move in wrong lane....
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ये आँखों-आँखों में जो infection spread होता है, उसके कारण दिल की हालत बड़ी critical हो जाती है ...
Ritu ..this poem is very different from other ..ruhaani .. bahut depth hai isme ..good :)
ritu jI ....aadaB
khaYal jO hai ki...dil dhak se raH gaya tha>>>....aacha haI aur aaPne ek naYa sa khayaL diya hai...per baKI kavitaye saB wahi bateN kaH rahe hai jO aaJ taK kahi gaye hai....
marI bate bure lage saYaD per maIn saYad aapKa aacha dOst Hu ...sayAd abhUt aacha !!!!
kucH naYa khaYal likhe kOI naYe
ibarat baNe....kOi naYa tazurMa...
kOi naYa maNzerNama .....jO aaPka hO sIrf aaPka!!jO kisi ne na kaHa hO.......aapNi aanKho se dekHiye JahaN KO ...........jaha ki aaanKHo se aaPne aapKo naHI.......
jate jate.....
riste darkhto ke jard patte hai,
tutte hai to taklif hoti hai.....
maF kiJiyeGa.....
Ritu here m agree wid vimal jee....
Maine ye nazm ya ghazal jo bi hai padhi to nahee....ya kah lo padh nahee paya..
But u have talent n some time u fail to decifer it.....
In nut shell.....u r good driver bt some time move in wrong lane....
bahut khoob!
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